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 My first [[tanka]] approximation:

 Gone gone
-Gone beyond
+Gone beyond (5)
+
 Everybody gone 
-to the other shore
+to the other shore ()

 go free (17)
 go kindly (20)

 if you have to go,
 go free! (27)
-go kindly! ()
+go kindly! (30)
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+come