diff --git a/tanka.md b/tanka.md index cfa0ddd24..060d2a08a 100644 --- a/tanka.md +++ b/tanka.md @@ -6,13 +6,16 @@ My first [[tanka]] approximation: Gone gone -Gone beyond +Gone beyond (5) + Everybody gone -to the other shore +to the other shore () go free (17) go kindly (20) if you have to go, go free! (27) -go kindly! () +go kindly! (30) + +come