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- [[30]] October - [[30]]
- Thinking about the transition from October to November and the transition from Julian to Gregorian calendar affecting dates related to the [[Soviet Revolution]]. - Thinking about the transition from October to November and the transition from Julian to Gregorian calendar affecting dates related to the [[Russian Revolution]] of October/November 1917.
- [[agora chapter]] - This also caused by my recently having started to read [[China Mieville]]'s book on the revolution :)
- General [[patterns]] identified by the editors - [[agora]]
- #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks - [[agora chapter]] deadline today, let's see how far I get!
- Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way) - General [[patterns]] identified by the editors
- #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora - #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks
- #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work - Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way)
- #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs - #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora
- #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs - #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work
- #G6 repetition - #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs
- #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing) - #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs
- #G8 use of bullet points which should be written as long form text - #G6 repetition
- #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing)
- #G8 use of bullet points which should be written as long form text