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From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Sun, 30 Oct 2022 00:27:13 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] autopushed

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-- [[30]] October
-  - Thinking about the transition from October to November and the transition from Julian to Gregorian calendar affecting dates related to the [[Soviet Revolution]].
-- [[agora chapter]]
-  - General [[patterns]] identified by the editors
-    - #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks
-      - Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way)
-    - #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora
-    - #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work
-    - #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs
-    - #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs
-    - #G6 repetition
-    - #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing)
-    - #G8 use of bullet points which should be written as long form text
+- [[30]]
+  - Thinking about the transition from October to November and the transition from Julian to Gregorian calendar affecting dates related to the [[Russian Revolution]] of October/November 1917.
+  - This also caused by my recently having started to read [[China Mieville]]'s book on the revolution :)
+- [[agora]]
+  - [[agora chapter]] deadline today, let's see how far I get!
+    - General [[patterns]] identified by the editors
+      - #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks
+        - Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way)
+      - #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora
+      - #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work
+      - #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs
+      - #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs
+      - #G6 repetition
+      - #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing)
+      - #G8 use of bullet points which should be written as long form text