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My first [[tanka]] written:
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The first [[tanka]] I wrote on [[2024-05-27]] after some brewing:
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```
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Gone gone (2)
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Everybody gone (10)
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to the other shore (15)
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Gone free (17)
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Gone kindly (20)
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Go free (17)
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Go kindly (20)
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If you have to burn (25)
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burn kindly! (28)
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