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-My first [[tanka]] written:
+The first [[tanka]] I wrote on [[2024-05-27]] after some brewing: 
 
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 Gone gone (2)
@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ Gone beyond (5)
 Everybody gone (10)
 to the other shore (15)
 
-Gone free (17)
-Gone kindly (20)
+Go free (17)
+Go kindly (20)
 
 If you have to burn (25)
 burn kindly! (28)