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 My first [[tanka]] approximation:

-Gone gone
+Gone gone (2)
 Gone beyond (5)

-Everybody gone 
+Everybody gone (10)
 to the other shore (15)

 Go free (17)
 Go kindly (20)

-If you have to go,
+If you have to go (25)
 go kindly! (28)

 Now awake (31)