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 - [[18]] is [[right understanding]] in the [[flancia]] [[pattern language]].
-  - I usually revisit the Flancia Pattern language daily, where I consider the date as the default drishti.
+  - Flancia is in some ways a [[calendar]]. I usually revisit the Flancia Pattern language daily, considering the day of the date as my default focus.
 - [[drishtis]] [[29]] meaning that 29 tends to remind me of items on which my focus is trained on by default in the running month
   - [[17]] was beautiful
   - [[20]] [[agora slides]] -> [[fotl]]