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   - #push [[interactive fiction]]
     - [[twine]] https://twinery.org/
 - [[flancia]]
-  - thought about the [[revolution]]
+  - started the day thinking about the [[revolution]] (thanks to the conversation with [[st]])
     - the term is entangled with violence through history -- it is a hard task, to [[disentangle]] it
       - very much like disentangling humanity from [[moloch]]!
+    - will try to use [[reform]] and [[empowerment]] as alternatives wherever they suffice, but I think referring to the [[revolution]] by its name is still important in certain contexts
+      - the [[revolution]] as I see it is defined by this Agora