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@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ I've known some good first two for a while now. One example:
 
 Meaning two items that are interesting to describe, that describe things that you might want to have a name for, just because it helps with coordination.
 
-But then you ask yourself: what's the third?
+But then you ask yourself: who's the third in that sequence?
 
-I say it's
+I say it's:
 
 - [[Avalokiteshvara]]
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