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 	- a [[subset]] of the [[internet]].
 		- The part that is willing to [[federate]].
 		- The part that works for its [[users]].
-		- The set of all [[open platforms]]; those which respect [[open protocols]].
+		- The set of all [[open platforms]]; those who follow [[open protocols]] and try to build [[commons]].
 - [[go]] https://fediverse.party/en/portal/servers
-	- I heartily recommend you choose an [[instance]] of any type (there are many) and join now. Prioritize this in particular if you're hooked with platforms such as [[instagram]] or [[twitter]].
+	- I heartily recommend you choose an [[instance]] of any type (there are many) and join now.
+	- Prioritize this in particular if you're hooked with platforms such as [[instagram]] or [[twitter]] :)
 - The [[agora]] is part of the [[federation]].
 	- It tries to run projects of [[public utility]].
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