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       - [[chinese room]]
         - I'd been waiting for the definitive Daniel Dennett takedown of [[Searle]].
       - [[chinese nation]]
-        - Dennett mentions the weird fixation with the Chinese in the philosophy of mind, mentioning a Chinese researcher's exposure to it while being exposed to Western cognitive science
+        - Dennett mentions the weird fixation with the Chinese in the philosophy of mind, mentioning a Chinese researcher's exposure to it while becoming acquainted with "Western" cognitive science