diff --git a/journal/2020-11-16.md b/journal/2020-11-16.md
index 18357837b..4c3f415b4 100644
--- a/journal/2020-11-16.md
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@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 - Test [[roam2agora]].
 - Update [[roam likes]].
 - Write about [[governance]] in [[Flancia]].
-- Work on items from [[agora plan]].
+- Work on an item from [[agora plan]].
 
 [//begin]: # "Autogenerated link references for markdown compatibility"
 [agora-go-links-integration]: ../agora-go-links-integration "Agora Go Links Integration"
diff --git a/paleoludic.md b/paleoludic.md
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--- a/paleoludic.md
+++ b/paleoludic.md
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 # Paleoludic
-- [[person]] in [[twitter]]: https://twitter.com/paleoludic
-- 
+
+- A [[person]] on [[twitter]]: https://twitter.com/paleoludic
+- Very funny. Probably the most underrated account I know?
+- His writing is really good but is often "preachy" to put it some way (not judging), which I think is likely to turn away many readers. I've given him this feedback.
 
 [//begin]: # "Autogenerated link references for markdown compatibility"
 [person]: person "Person"