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     - [[plain text]] as layer 0 (bootstrapping).
       - What the literate world already runs on: just plain old human language in full [[unicode]].
       - Collections of indented bulleted lists are efficient while encoding trees, a [[heterarchy]].
-    - [[wikilinks]], #hashtags and other link conventions and annotation formats as layer 1.
-    - For [[extensions]] to this core protocol:
-      - Push your proposals to node [[agora rfcs]].
+    - [[wikilinks]], #hashtags and other link conventions and annotation as part of layer 1.
+    - From being community defined through [[extensions]] to the core protocol:
+      - If you are a member of an Agora, you can propose extensions by noding [[agora rfcs]].
       - Other layers are discussed there and settled through a [[governance layer]] defined by each [[agora]].
 
 We describe later how an Agora can integrate with the wider internet ecosystem and how it could be used to run experiments on distributed thought.