diff --git a/journal/2023-01-15.md b/journal/2023-01-15.md
index 4046ce148..475210650 100644
--- a/journal/2023-01-15.md
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@@ -8,4 +8,4 @@
   - we will [[cross that river]], [[build that bridge]], [[cross that threshold]], for the benefit of sentient beings.
   - in Flancia we'll grow and live kindly.
 - #push [[flancia]]
-  - A [[Flancian]] is someone who believes we'll [[defeat Moloch]].
+  - A [[Flancian]] is someone who believes we'll [[defeat Moloch]] or way or another.
diff --git a/save moloch.md b/save moloch.md
index 1d4d637cc..9e2e144c9 100644
--- a/save moloch.md	
+++ b/save moloch.md	
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@
   - We [[rehabilitated]] them; meaning the [[egregore]] that managed to manifest and preserve themselves in [[humanity]] through [[history]].
   - We [[disentangled]] them from humanity.
   - #push [[moloch]]
-    - What if we tried to [[save]] [[Moloch]]? To try to redeem them? Let them redefine themselves for [[good]].
+    - What if we tried to [[save]] [[Moloch]]? To try to redeem them? Let them redefine themselves in a way that increases the common [[good]].
       - I'd give them the [[benefit of doubt]] if they used [[an agora]].
-    - (would you like to [[slay moloch]] while we have a chance instead?)
+  - -> Would you like to [[slay moloch]] if we ever get the chance instead?