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Date: Sun, 24 Jul 2022 19:40:37 +0200
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 In this paper we describe an **[[Agora]]**, a free [[knowledge commons]] bootstrapped on a subset of the [[internet]], optionally integrating [[digital gardens]], [[wikis]] and [[social networks]] using [[free software]].
   
 This system has four facets: 
-  - A [[protocol]].
+  - A [[protocol]] based on simple conventions.
     - #pull [[agora protocol]]
   - A set of [[data exchange formats]].
     - #pull [[agora formats]]
   - A reference [[free software]] implementation of a platform built on these.
   - A **knowledge graph** provisioned and maintained by a community as a self-governing [commons](https://anagora.org/commons), and associated [[services]].
-- An Agora is designed to be a minimum viable cooperative platform that integrates and complements both [[personal knowledge graphs]] and [[social networks]].
+- An Agora is designed to be a minimum viable cooperative platform that integrates and complements [[personal knowledge graphs]] and, more generally, [[human thought]].
 - An Agora stands out from other projects in the [[knowledge graph]] space in a few ways: 
     - Whereas links in a personal knowledge graph or wiki usually have a single target (note, page), **Agora links fan out by default**; targets can be thought of [[collections]] of resources. 
     - While a **personal knowledge graph** usually contains resources and links authored or collected by a single person, and a **wiki** usually contains resources provisioned by a group in (a priori) a shared voice, an Agora tries to integrate and interlink both personal and group resources while preserving distinct voices[^chorus].