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 - an [[essay]].
   - Or beginning of an essay, which could be said of so many nodes around the [[Agora of Flancia]] :)
 
-I say we *will* defeat [[Moloch]], and the reasons and the ways are simple, even though the process will be difficult.
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+I say we *will* defeat [[Moloch]], and the way we will do it is simple, even though the process will be difficult and our victory is far from certain.
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