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 Writing this on the flight to Seattle. My connection in [[Charlotte]] was tight but I made it just fine in the end.
 
-I wonder who are you, you reading this. If you are reading this in an Agora, consider leaving a comment or annotation using the Hypothesis side bar or reaching out :)
+(I wonder who you are, you reading this. If you are interested consider leaving an annotation using the Hypothesis side bar or reaching out :)
 
-Thank you for reading.
+Thank you for reading!
 
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