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 - a book [[chapter]].
-  - See also: [[pkg book]], [[agora pkg chapter]], [[agora doc]].
-  - #go https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BXcGKLsuXgQy2go2lCI54K6Gv-9vV-zeiD_SNl7JZvo
-    - Is the [[living document]] that was published in the Commons proper in [[June 2024]] and I intend to maintain going forward.
-  - #oldgo https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DXJRDh9Ss5VCRBi3oirDw9d7yjn3H2hMqfN2ETTyjIc/edit
-    - Was the only version available in the [[commons]] prior to [[June 2024]] when the post-editing for the [[pkg book]] version became available.
+  - See also: [[PKG book]], [[agora pkg chapter]], [[agora doc]].
+  - #oldgo https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BXcGKLsuXgQy2go2lCI54K6Gv-9vV-zeiD_SNl7JZvo
+    - Was the only version freely available from [[June 2023]] to [[June 2024]], when the version edited for the [[PKG book]] became available in the Commons.
+  - #go https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DXJRDh9Ss5VCRBi3oirDw9d7yjn3H2hMqfN2ETTyjIc/edit
+    - Is the [[living document]] that was published in the Commons in [[June 2024]] and I intend to maintain going forward.
   - #pull https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSYDn9CoWlS5MOtgdK4q2etAVDf_IXgDNJE8CKzQ73SGVmSDY5Vd0Azakw9s6ogR7LYADNxG2j-F9Na/pub?embedded=true
-    - An earlier [[draft]]
+    - If you like [[embeddings]] :)
   - Historical [[notes]] from writing and editing follow :)
     - This will be a part of [[pkg book]] if I write it to a good standard before [[2022-09-01]] :)
     - or maybe [[2022-10-30]] ;)
@@ -112,4 +112,4 @@ Let's see how it goes though. It's 17:40 now, but the house is ready and dinner
 Back in this part of town! Starting pomodoros at 15. I hope to be able to finish this today. I'm primary oncall for Meet but oncall on weekends is usually quiet; let's see :)
 
 ## [[2024-06-18]]
-Back here one year after publishing this work in the [[PKG book]] to make it available in the [[Commons]] :) What a ride! 
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+Back here one year after publishing this work in the [[PKG book]] to make it available in the [[Commons]] :) What a ride!