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   - [[Markdown]] is easy to use and most [[roam likes]] can be made to produce it (or use it as main format).
 	  - I want the [[Agora]] to be [[maximally inclusive]] and [[minimally disruptive]].
 	  - I'd like to support all reasonable formats eventually, starting with plain text (of course) and [[org mode]].
-- The only extension to [[Markdown]] that the [[Agora]] depends on is [[wikilinks]].
-	- Most agora functionality makes use only of wikilinks to s
+- The only extension to [[Markdown]] (you could say to [[natural language]]) that the [[Agora]] requires is [[wikilinks]].
+	- Most Agora functionality requires only that users express an intent to interact with the agora by the use of conventions built on bare [[wikilinks]].
 	- If you use a [[wikilink]] on [[social media]] and follow an [[agora]]'s account, you are expressing an intent to [[interop]].
 	- [[pull]] [[wikilinks everywhere]]