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 This node is longer than the average Agora node :) It has the following sections:
 
-- In this subnode (text file):
-  - An abstract, which is a snapshot of what I delivered in early [[2022-06]] to the book editors.
-  - The actual chapter, which should be 5k-10k words once ready.
-- In a [[stoa]] subnode below:
+- In this subnode (this text file):
+  - An abstract, which is close to a snapshot of what I delivered in early [[2022-06]] to the book editors. It's meant to be a short stand-alone introduction; maybe it should be merged with the actual introduction below.
+  - The actual chapter, which should be 5k-10k words once ready to be delivered (and hopefully coherent by then :)).
+- In the subnode below, sourced from the [[stoa]]:
   - A snapshot of the chapter outline as it was when I delivered it to editors on July 4. This is a parallel version, writable by any; feel free to edit it in whichever direction you want to take it.
       
 
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 The free and open source reference Agora provides a minimum viable implementation of the [underlay](https://anagora.org/underlay), **interlay**, **overlay** components of a **distributed knowledge graph** based on off-the-shelf components. Individual Agora instances are expected to **federate** and organize into a greater **Agora network**. We describe how this network can integrate with the wider internet ecosystem and how it could be used to run experiments on distributed thought.
 
+[^inclusivity]:  
+[^diversity]: 
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 # Chapter
 
 (See also the [[public document]] below which I seeded with the snapshot of the outline I delivered on [[2022-07-04]] to the book editors. Changes in the [[stoa]] and you contributing other [[subnodes]] are of course most welcome.)