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 - In this [[agora]]:
   - A [[stoa]] is a [[group]] of [[people]] in an [[agora]] with [[compatible]] [[worldviews]] and [[tools]] and [[interests]] conducive to [[cooperation]].
     - In particular, well-working stoas are likely to be integrated by people with [[aligned]] or [[complementary]] [[goals]] and [[values]].
-  - I'd like Some possible Stoas:
+  - I would like to propose a number of Stoas:
     - The [[first stoa]] focuses on building and running an [[agora]].
       - See [[agora plan]], [[agora protocol]], [[wikilinks everywhere]], [[browser extensions]], [[agora twitter integration]] if you'd like to build an [[agora]] with [[me]].
       - See [[agora howto]] if you'd like to contribute to the [[agora]] as a [[user]].
-    - The [[second stoa]] is focused on freeing and otherwise improving the [[internet]].
-      - See [[flanbook]], [[wikilinks everywhere]].
-    - The [[third stoa]] is focused on world improvement: it seeks to build a dependency graph of important problems to work on and then tries to solve it given available resources.
+    - The [[second stoa]] focuses on freeing, opening up and otherwise improving the [[internet]] using [[open source]] and [[open ethics]].
+      - See [[flanbook]], [[wikilinks everywhere]], [[agora protocol]] if you'd like to participate.
+    - The [[third stoa]] is focused on world improvement: it seeks to use [[state of the art]] [[tools]] to model the world and execute on a [[protopia]]. 
+      - Maintain a database of [[problems]] then tries to solve it given available resources.
       - [[world improvement]]
 
 [//begin]: # "Autogenerated link references for markdown compatibility"
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 [agora twitter integration]: agora-twitter-integration "Agora Twitter Integration"
 [me]: me "Me"
 [agora howto]: agora-howto "Agora Howto"
+[open source]: open-source "Open Source"
+[open ethics]: open-ethics "Open Ethics"
 [flanbook]: flanbook "Flanbook"
+[protopia]: protopia "Protopia"
+[problems]: problems "Problems"
 [world improvement]: world-improvement "World Improvement"
 [//end]: # "Autogenerated link references"
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