From b65a89516c45e8df17c3e7478f4a5601890c6f48 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Sun, 30 Oct 2022 00:19:32 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] autopushed

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 journal/2022-10-30.md | 6 +++---
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@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
     - #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks
       - Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way)
     - #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora
-    - #G3
-    - #G4
-    - #G5
+    - #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work
+    - #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs
+    - #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs
     - #G6
     - #G7
     - #G8