diff --git a/zine.md b/zine.md
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+++ b/zine.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
 Thank you Bouncepaw, my friend, for creating this zine and inviting me to participate. Thank you also, reader, for reading these words. I don't want to distract from the rest of the pieces in this collection for longer than needed so I will try to be straight (like an arrow) if perhaps not to the point.
 
-I'm here to tell you something about cities, but I will share a part of me before it and after it say my goodbyes and wish you well.
+I'm here to tell you something about cities, but I will share a part of me before it and wish you well.
 
  
 ```poetry
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ to the other shore
 Gone free,
 Gone kindly
 
-(When you have to go…)
+(If you have to go for it)
 Go free
 Go kindly