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   - we will [[cross that river]], [[build that bridge]], [[cross that threshold]], for the benefit of sentient beings.
   - in Flancia we'll grow and live kindly.
 - #push [[flancia]]
-  - A [[Flancian]] is someone who believes we'll [[defeat Moloch]] or way or another.
-  - It is through the [[commons]] we'll manage to leave [[Moloch]] in the dust if we have to.
-  - The [[Agora]] is a [[knowledge commons]] we're trying to build that might help [[disentangle Moloch]] from humanity.
+  - A [[Flancian]] is someone who believes we'll [[defeat Moloch]] one way or another.
+  - It is through the kind, rational, distributed use of the [[Commons]] we'll manage to leave [[Moloch]] in the dust if we have to.
+  - The [[Agora]] is a [[knowledge commons]] we're trying to build with the intention to help [[disentangle Moloch]] from humanity.