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 	- centered around [[Salons]] -- relatively exclusive events you usually have to pay a low fee to attend.
 	- my old position:
 		- I dislike the name, a lot. I dislike the whole 'niche', 'intellectual' aspect of it.
-		- I dislike the e
+		- I dislike the "exclusivity" focus the group seem to have at least in some initial messaging; it felt [[exclusionary]].  I dislike the word "luxe".
 		- [[evaricweicksel]] likes it though, and he seems cool.
 		- [[visakanv]] apparently also likes it.
-		- I have no idea if I'm in it -- I joined it early, then never heard about it, and [[Anna Gat]] didn't seem interested in interacting with me at all. Yet I received a ping from a random person on Twitter offering a beta program for members of it (?).
+		- I don't know if I'm in it -- I joined it early, then never heard about it, and [[Anna Gat]] didn't seem interested in interacting with me at all. Yet I received a ping from a random person on Twitter offering a beta program for members of it (?).