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     - At the same time I saw [[ChatGPT]] called the [[ultimate mansplainer]].
     - Both takes are right in a way, but I think the second one feels a bit conservative to me whereas the first one feels liberal.
   - [[books]]
-    - Isn't it funny we are at a point in which some may discount [[LLM]]s as "just learning from a corpus and repeating/combining information found there" at the same time we regularly call books, in particular those read in our youth, formative? At the same time society is thoroughly shaped by the language, culture, knowledge preserved for us primarily in the form of [[books]]?
+    - Isn't it funny we are at a point in which some discount [[LLM]]s as "just learning from a corpus and repeating/combining information found there" at the same time we regularly call books, in particular those read in our youth, formative? At the same time we can observe society to be thoroughly shaped by the language, culture, knowledge preserved and presented to us primarily in the form of [[books]]?