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From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Sat, 20 Aug 2022 18:44:59 +0200
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     - In an Agora, the place they lead to by default includes resources written by others.
 - [[Outlines]], as encoded by nested lists such as this one, may be parsed in an Agora by default as declaring structured [[assertions]].
 
-When interpreting the above and extensions, an Agora is liberal in what it accepts and when in doubt tries to default to being extra useful to the user -- meaning it is optimistic in association and surfaces all resources that have a claim to being associated with the context being queried. For example: #CamelCase will be provided in all contexts matching [[camel case]] and all known variations, and this relationship is symmetric by default, in the sense that the user might provide either and be later served matching resources in all associated contexts.
+When interpreting the above and extensions, an Agora is liberal in what it accepts and when in doubt tries to default to being extra useful to the user -- meaning it is optimistic in association and surfaces all resources that have a claim to be associated with the context being served. For example: #CamelCase will be provided in all contexts matching [[camel case]] and all known variations, and this relationship is symmetric by default, in the sense that the user might provide either at write time and be later served matching resources in either context.
 
-To put simply, an Agora optimistically defines equivalence classes with good intention. Later we will cover two hypotheses associated with this being an optimal default policy.
+To put it simply, an Agora defines equivalence classes optimistically with good intention. Later we will discuss the hypothesis that this is an optimal default policy for a social platform.
 
 In an Agora, both long form text and outlines in [[Agora Protocol]] are by default interpreted as volunteered heterarchies encoding relationships between named [[entities]] at different levels.