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 - The laundry timer just went off.
 - And now I'm back, after putting laundry to dry (tumble) and another load :)
 
-What do I want to remember so much, you might ask yourself. Why, to answer that is that build [[Agoras]].
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+What do I want to remember so much, you might ask yourself. Well, to answer that thoroughly and clearly is that I like to build [[Agoras]].
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