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 - a [[short story]].
 
-Maybe Musk will wake up, you tell yourself. He will realize he's being suboptimal and, within his aspergy self, the realization will arise that he is in need of updating his policies.
+Maybe Musk will wake up, you tell yourself. He will realize he's being suboptimal and, somehow within his aspergy self, the realization will arise that he is in need of looking around and updating his policies.
 
 -> [[Open Letter to Elon Musk]]