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 - A [[thing]].
   - A [[bag of holding]].
-  - [[equivalent]] to the knowledge and beauty contained therein.
+  - [[equivalent]] to all the knowledge and beauty potentially contained transitively therein.
 
 I'm writing a book. I call it [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations but it is only a [[draft]].
 
-It is currently just this: this note you're reading, and the links you follow in this platform, which I've partly put together as a gift for [[you]].
+It is currently just this: this note you're reading, and the links you may choose to follow in this awkward medium, which I've put together as a gift for [[you]]. An offering for the [[people]].
 
 These are the chapters of Flancia:
 
-- [[Building bridges]].
+- [[Manifesto]].
+- [[On building bridges]].
 - [[In Flancia there is an Agora]].
 - [[In Flancia there is no violence]].
 - [[In Flancia there is no ruler but open ethics]].
 - [[Towards caramel city]].
 - [[Against gag orders]].
 - [[In protopoi space]].
-- [[On the pedagogy of revolution]].
+- [[On the pedagogy of the revolution]].
 
 
 
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 [//begin]: # "Autogenerated link references for markdown compatibility"
 [thing]: thing "Thing"
 [you]: you "You"
+[people]: people "People"
 [//end]: # "Autogenerated link references"
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