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 ## Thank you
 
-Thank you for your writing and for your ideas and evaluations as you have expressed them through your life. I am inspired by them, and by the works you have inspired. You have brought light to the world, however you care to define it, and for that myself and other sentient beings are very thankful.
+Thank you for your writing and for your ideas and evaluations on ethical matters as you have expressed them through your life. I am inspired by them, and by the works you have inspired. You have brought light to the world in many ways, however you care to define it, and for that I and many other sentient beings will be .
 
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