diff --git a/journal/2022-10-30.md b/journal/2022-10-30.md index 075a9b7bd..31a0f0eaf 100644 --- a/journal/2022-10-30.md +++ b/journal/2022-10-30.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -- #push [[agora chapter]] +- [[agora chapter]] - General [[patterns]] identified by the editors - #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks - Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way) @@ -8,4 +8,4 @@ - #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs - #G6 repetition - #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing) - - #G8 + - #G8 use of bullet points which should be written as long form text