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-Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- and by extension to the [[Agora of Flancia]].
+Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- and by extension, through composition, an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]].
 
-If you are reading this in an [[Agora]] proper, you should see it in the context of several other indexes -- potentially one for each user contributing to that particular Agora :)
+If you are reading this in the [[Agora]] proper, you should see it in the context of several other indexes -- potentially one for each user contributing to that particular Agora :)
 
 You can add your own contribution to the index of any Agoras you participate in by storing an `index.md` file in your [[garden]] or [[stoa]] and contributing it to the Agora in question; please see [[how to edit this Agora]] below if interested.