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 - a [[node club]] entry.
 	- #pull [[revolution in the 21st century]]
-	- I believe the twenty first century might be amazing. it is the time of a really big change.
+	- I believe the twenty first century might be an amazing time to be alive. it is the time of a really big change.
 		- It is this simple: we will get to a better world through a series of well meaning cooperative revolutions.
-	- [[Flancia]] tries to define my proposal for one such revolution through a variety of means, from a set of viewpoints.
-		- These are my core beliefs: in [[Flancia]] there is no [[poverty]], in [[Flancia]] there is an [[Agora]], [[in Flancia one day we'll meet]].
+		- [[Flancia]] tries to define my proposal for one such revolution through a variety of means, from a set of viewpoints.
+			- These are my core beliefs: in [[Flancia]] there is no [[poverty]], in [[Flancia]] there is an [[Agora]], [[in Flancia one day we'll meet]].
 	- #pull [[2000s]] [[perhaps naive]]
 - a [[list]].
 	- #pull [[21st century revolutions]]