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-Sun Jul 04 2021 00:09:42 GMT+0200 (Central European Summer Time)
-Sun Jul 04 2021 00:08:43 GMT+0200 (Central European Summer Time)
+Sun Jul 04 2021 00:10:42 GMT+0200 (Central European Summer Time)
+Sun Jul 04 2021 00:09:43 GMT+0200 (Central European Summer Time)
 Sat Jul 03 2021 13:05:07 GMT+0200 (Central European Summer Time)
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 - A [[thing]].
 	- [[pull]] [[books]].
 - A [[bag of holding]].
-	- [[conducive]] or [[convergent]] to the stuff and knowledge that in it you can carry or that carried or transitively derived.
+	- [[conducive]] or [[convergent]] to the stuff and knowledge that in it you can carry or you can transitively derive.
 
-I'm trying to write a book. I call it [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations, as per usual, but it is really only a rough [[draft]].
+I'm trying to write a book. I call it [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations, as usual, but it is really only a rough [[draft]].
 
-In lieu of the book, you'll have to accept this: this note you're reading, and the links you may choose to follow as you find them embedded in this sometimes awkward medium, which I'm putting together as a gift for [[you]].
+In lieu of the book, you'll have to accept this: this note you're reading, and the links you may choose to follow as you find them embedded in this sometimes awkward medium, which I'm trying to put together as a gift.
 
 [[Flancia]], or [[building bridges]]: