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   - [[do]]
     - fix bugs in the [[agora]]
 - [[2022 resolutions]]
-- started watching [[hyperland]] last night. enjoyable so far!
-  - couldn't help feeling it's awesome how so many people (4.5B as of today?) *did* get amazing connectivity and software agents -- although our agents today are unfortunately less eager to be customized than back then.
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+- started watching [[hyperland]] last night. I'm enjoying it!
+  - couldn't help feeling it's awesome how so many people (4.5B as of today?) *did* get amazing connectivity and software agents -- although our agents today are unfortunately less eager to be customized than that in the show (the internet as of the late 10-15 years hasn't been exactly about empowering users to do as they please, it would seem.)
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