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-I sometimes feel as if I've seen what will happen, I truly believe in it -- at least as an area with non null metric in the [[multiverse]].
+I sometimes feel as if I've seen what will happen, and I truly believe in it -- at least as a volume with non null metric in the [[multiverse]], reachable from our present day.