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 ```
 Burn burn burn,
 Burn for the greater good!
-Burn brightly .
+Burn brightly.
 
 Gone gone, gone beyond.
-Everybody gone to the other shore.
-Gone brightly.
+Everybody gone (to the other shore).
+Gone kindly.
 
 If you have to burn: burn kindly.
 
-If I can't be a candle, I'll be a spaceship.
+If I can't be a candle, 
+I'll be a spaceship.
 ```
-