From 8d7346516b574957f010875890e7a46e6b614afc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Sun, 14 Mar 2021 17:34:02 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Auto: misc.

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 book.md | 7 +++++--
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/book.md b/book.md
index 8f1ebf071..682811fe3 100644
--- a/book.md
+++ b/book.md
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
   - A [[bag of holding]].
   - [[equivalent]] to all the knowledge and beauty potentially contained transitively therein.
 
-I'm writing a book. I call it [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations but it is only a [[draft]].
+I'm writing a book. I call it [[Flancia]]. I have lofty aspirations, as usual, but it is currently only a rough [[draft]].
 
-It is currently just this: this note you're reading, and the links you may choose to follow in this awkward medium, which I've put together as a gift for [[you]]. An offering for the [[people]].
+In lieu of a book, please consider this: this note you're reading, and the links you may choose to follow as embedded in this sometimes awkward medium, which I've put together as a gift for [[you]]. 
 
 These are the chapters of Flancia:
 
@@ -21,7 +21,9 @@ These are the chapters of Flancia:
 - [[In Protopoi Space]].
 - [[On the pedagogy of the revolution]].
 
+This is an offering for the [[people]]. 
 
+Have a nice day, and may you ever [[thrive]]!
 
 
 
@@ -29,4 +31,5 @@ These are the chapters of Flancia:
 [thing]: thing "Thing"
 [you]: you "You"
 [people]: people "People"
+[thrive]: thrive "Thrive"
 [//end]: # "Autogenerated link references"
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