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   - [[agora doc]]
     - [ ] together with a contributors' agreement
     - [ ] must be delivered tonight
-      - [ ] resolve more comments
+      - [x] resolve more comments
       - [ ] and some more
       - [ ] better define the role of [[patterning]]
         - [ ] maybe just defer to [[free, fair and alive]] throughout? but cite/mention christopher alexander's and hans widmer's aspirational [[global-scale patterns]]
+          - mentioned [[hans widmer]] in education with [[paulo freire]]
       - [ ] I wanted to add one or more graphs or diagrams
       - [ ] and just do one round of general editing
       - [ ] or two :)