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 - One of a series of [[Open Letters]].
-- I thought I'd write this now years ago, maybe it will finally happen. I recently heard [[Peter Singer]] again 
+- I thought I'd write this now years ago, maybe it will finally happen. 
 
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-Hi Peter, you don't know me but I feel I know you -- through your books and your public conversations. I am writing this [[open letter]] in the hope that you will eventually find time to read it, or at least to skim it, but I do not write it with the intention of putting a burden on you; I am just doing out of the belief that it is worth thanking you, and asking you a question (which may be answered also for others which have good mental representations of your self, or might hold interesting opinions in their own right).
+Hi Peter, I'm sure you get this often: you don't know me but I feel like I know you -- as I've gotten to know you through your books and your public conversations. I am writing this [[open letter]] in the hope that you will eventually find time to read it, or at least to skim it, but I do not write it with the intention of putting a burden on you; I am just doing out of the belief that it is worth thanking you, and asking you a question (which may be answered also for others which have good mental representations of your self, or might hold interesting opinions in their own right).
 
 ## Thank you