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 	- [[breath is the palace of buddha]]
 	- I sometimes do my own variation on [[box breating]] combined with [[counting]]. It's maybe a bit idiosyncratic but it helps me focus; I'll write more about it in this node.
 		- It's important to let go of it after a while, though, instead of becoming attached to the counting.
-	- While I breathe, I visualize a box.
-		- On breathing in, I count and optionally visualize the number as I go up the leftmost edge.
-		-
+	- While I breathe, I sometimes visualize a box.
+		- On breathing in, I count and optionally visualize a number inside or near the box as I go up the leftmost edge.
+		- On not yet breathing out, I go right through the upper edge.
+		- On breathing out, I go down the rightmost
 	-
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