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 # yoga with x
 - a [[project]].
-	- [[mashup]] [[remix]] engine
-	- a set of tools to make it easier for people to coordinate massively online over platforms such as [[youtube]], focused on doing yoga together.
+	- [[mashup]] or [[remix]] engine
+	- a set of tools to make it easier for people to coordinate massively online over platforms such as [[youtube]], focused on doing [[yoga]] together.
 		- generalizes to [[x with y]] :)
 	- inspired by [[yoga with adriene]], which we're big fans of.
 	- [[playlist]] https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLofT8_Cv-W-NMgYeb7mtN3M_kBgkYgUjq
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 		- [[episode 3]] https://youtu.be/z9QNeqz6iNs
 	- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E3jFEOD2tIU
 	- [[drive]] https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/1LbO9OHAaI793g-61wVh13EgE0wxuh3hj
-	-
-	- [[doc]] to come
-- a [[short story]].
-	- very much a beginning of [[draft]] :)
+	- [[doc]] to come.
+- maybe also a [[short story]].
+	- very much the beginning of [[draft]] :)
 	- "It started as a joke, partly a reflection on my own egocentrism. We loved doing [[Yoga with Adriene]] and [[Benji]] but sometimes struggled with poses and transitions; the opportunity to watch ourselves while we were doing [[yoga]] proved too tempting, the webcam was pointed, [[meet]] was opened, then we were off.
 	  
 	  From there to recording us was but a step; and from there to [[fractal yoga]], recursively many (just joking -- it was two.) But that was later. First came the [[mirrors]] -- by which I mean additional [[screens]], phones, laptops -- showing the same yoga video through the convenient mean of a remote screen connection. This solved the issue of not being able to see Adriene (or, indeed, us) while in a pose facing away from the main screen.