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 - #push [[agora chapter]]
-  - [[patterns]] identified by the editors
+  - General [[patterns]] identified by the editors
     - #G1 too many links / links which aren't explicitly wikilinks
       - Strategy: cut links by 50%, add back [[wikilink markers]] for all remaining links (makes me "pay for them" in a way)
     - #G2 should address the reader of the book more than the user of an Agora
     - #G3 lacking information on similar initiatives/prior work
     - #G4 should be less of a manifesto and more a concrete description of the system that integrates PKGs
     - #G5 lacks cohesion, add transitional paragraphs
-    - #G6
-    - #G7
+    - #G6 repetition
+    - #G7 Agora discussed as having agency (might be OK, but might also be confusing)
     - #G8