From 78605ad3583da7ed5feb95a892c627281e21ce34 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Flancian <0@flancia.org>
Date: Thu, 7 Mar 2024 22:31:33 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] autopushed

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 index.md | 4 ++--
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@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ A [[node]] is a collection of [[resources]] having to do with a topic; a [[thing
 The following are maybe interesting nodes to serve as entry points to this garden, and to the Agora at large. 
 
   - [[Person]]: contains links to nodes about [[people]].
-  - [[Agora]]: I write about the Agora often, in the Agora of course :) This node, like all and the Agora proper, is a [[work in progress]] -- 
+  - [[Agora]]: I write about the Agora often, in the Agora of course :) This node, like all and the Agora proper, is a [[work in progress]] -- but it should be a reasonable starting point to understand what the [[Agora]] is and what it tries to achieve.
   - [[Commons]]: the [[Free]] [[Commons]] is an ideal that the Agora tries to uphold and represent for the benefit of its users and all sentient beings. A lot of my writing has to do with the Commons in one way or another.
   - #go: you can find in the context links to nodes which contain a URL marked as canonical for the topic in question. It is an example of an [[Agora action]] which [[redirects]] to these URLs on demand.
     
-Beyond the resources (mostly text [[notes]]) in the nodes themselves, check for [[links]] in and out established through use.
+Beyond checking the resources (mostly text [[notes]]) in the nodes themselves, check for [[links]] in and out established through use.
 
 If you are reading this in [[git]] or an [[editor]], please refer to https://anagora.org to render nodes with fully resolved links and offered context :).