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 - a [[node club]] entry.
 	- #pull [[revolution in the 21st century]]
 	- I believe the twenty first century might be amazing. it is the time of a really big change.
-	- we will get to a better world through a well meaning cooperative revolution.
-	- [[flancia]] is my submission.
+	- It is this simple: we will get to a better world through a series of well meaning cooperative revolutions.
+	- [[Flancia]] tries to define my proposal for one such revolution through a variety of means and from a set of viewpoints.
 - a [[list]].
 	- #pull [[21st century revolutions]]
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