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 # Revolution
-- a [[thing]].
+- a [[process]].
 	- #pull [[revolutions]]
 	- [[political action]] [[disruptive]]
-	- ocassionally, but not necessarily in the end, [[disruptive]]
+	- ocassionally, but not necessarily in the end, [[disruptive]]?
 		- my proposal for the revolution is the [[flancian revolution]], which is designed to be reasonably all-optional
 	- [[wp]] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Revolution
 		- [[quote]] a revolution (Latin: revolutio, "a turn around") is a [[fundamental]] and [[relatively sudden]] change in [[political power]] and political organization which occurs [[when the population revolts against the government]], typically due to perceived [[oppression]] (political, social, economic) or political incompetence.