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-Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- and by extension, through composition, an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]], which is meant to be a [[Knowledge Commons]].
+Here we are in the [[index]] of my [[digital garden]] -- which serves, by extension, through composition, an entry point to the [[Agora of Flancia]], which is meant to be a [[Knowledge Commons]].
 
 If you are reading this in an [[Agora]] proper, you should see it rendered surrounded by several other indexes -- potentially one for each user contributing to the Agora, in some order :) If you are reading this in [[git]] or an only partially supported editor, please refer to https://anagora.org or some other well-known Agora to render this with resolved links and full context :).