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 # Meta
 
-This node is longer than the average Agora node :)
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-It has the following sections:
+This node is longer than the average Agora node :) It has the following sections:
 
 - In this subnode (text file):
   - An abstract, which is a snapshot of what I delivered in early [[2022-06]] to the book editors.
   - The actual chapter, which should be 5k-10k words once ready.
-- In a [[stoa]] below:
+- In a [[stoa]] subnode below:
   - A snapshot of the chapter outline as it was when I delivered it to editors on July 4. This is a parallel version, writable by any; feel free to edit it in whichever direction you want to take it.
       
 
 # Abstract
 
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 In this chapter we describe an **Agora**, being a **social knowledge graph** provisioned and maintained by a community as a [commons](https://anagora.org/commons). 
 
 The Agora differs from other projects in the knowledge space in a few ways: whereas a **personal knowledge graph** usually contains resources authored or collected by a single person, and a **wiki** usually contains resources produced by a group, an Agora contains and integrates both personal and group resources and interlinks them liberally. Whereas links in a personal knowledge graph or wiki usually have a single target, **Agora links fan out by default** and can be thought of as mapping to sets of resources. Finally, **the reference Agora tries to remain tool, format and platform agnostic**, trying to build first on general conventions common to many tools and platforms in the knowledge space for maximal inclusivity and diversity.